Freddies Fun park
Come on PIPE my HORSE keep on walking were nearly there said Peter. When we arrived at the pond there was silence. UNTIL..... 'SPLASH'!! water came splashing out. Then pop out of the water came a large bright green frog. G'day i'm Fred the Frog. Peter's mouth shot wide open and his eyeballs nearly popped out of his head. You You can talk oh yes i do, sorry if i gave you a fright. Welcome to my water park. Whooaaaa Peter said. As fred carefully climbed up his sturdy ladder he jumped of his big diving board and swam to the lilly-pad.
I enjoyed reading your story about Freddies Fun Park!!! I liked how you added in Adjectives for your characters. I will hope to see more of this Work Done.
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